Wednesday, 3 November 2021

Winners of #WEP October Challenge

"What a phenomenal group of writers WEP has." 

Nick Wilford, WEP judge.

Hello everyone! Jemi here! We would like to thank those of you who took part in the October Challenge THE SCREAM. This is a spooky time of year and our writers certainly delivered! 

Welcome to newbies, Shilpa Gupte  and Neel Anil Panicker. We hope to see you again soon! And welcome back after a long absence, Debbie Doglady. 

Thank you all for writing blurbs/taglines for the stories. Don't worry, if you forgot, we've always got your back.

We'll keep asking for taglines in the next challenges - they're great for practicing pitches for our stories. We thank our co-host, Jemi Fraser, for collating them.


Denise Covey The Child - Trust is not a given. Sometimes you reach for an apple and are handed a grenade

Yolanda Renée Lucky 13 - 13 can be a very lucky number!

Jemi Fraser The Predator - When there’s nowhere to run

Nilanjana Bose Tangerine - Not all pipers lead evils away. Some lead it into the very heart of cities, and of men..

Olga Godim Scream - Swindlers are eternal. They even travel by spaceships. On the spaceship Mariposa, the Fleet cadet Neville needs to outwit a swindler.

Debbie D Scream! A Nightmarish Tale - Have you ever woken up screaming in the middle of the night?

NR Williams Mud Spiders - While mourning the loss of her beautiful neighborhood, Becca discovers something terrifying. 

J Lenni Dorner Savage Findings - A fictional 15th-century anthropologist delivers his findings, then screams when ignorant royalty destroys his work

Jemima Pett The Scream - A haunted house mystery with added cheese on toast

Jamie The Regret Scream - The Regret Scream is a dystopian flash fiction where Covid is also spread by burning infected bodies, and an antimasker commits manslaughter

Pat Garcia Stop Signs Ignored - Ignoring stop signs can be deadly.

Susan Rouchard Crossing the Bridge - A long road of sufferings, peppered with hope.

Hilary The Scream - When the white man pumps it to work, it screams

Carole Stolz The Scream - The terror of hearing blood curdling screaming in the night... with a twist.

Steph Wolmarans The Scream is Silent - Autism Acceptance because Awareness is not enough

Damyanti Biswas A Smothered Scream On occasion, a scream lasts long, and makes no sound

Carrie Ann Golden The ScreamSome dares make you scream

Elephant’s Child Un… Sometimes no-one else will hear your screams.

Rebecca M. Douglass The Scream - What terrors lurk in the root cellar?

L.G. Keltner Cries in the Night - Two girls, alone in the woods, face the choice to help or hide when an unexpected danger approaches

Dixie Jarchow The Scream - Forever is fluorescent orange. A true story. 

Lenny Lee Eyes - The Legend of Cornelia Thornheart 

Kalpana Through Rhea’s Eyes - Amara is preparing for Diwali, but her daughter has other questions

Shilpa Gupte The Scream - The cost of freedom

Michael Di Gesu Mommy Kay - fifteen-year-old Kimmie tells the story...she didn't want any part of this trip, but Mommy ALWAYS got her way.

Roland Clarke Crime Never Sleeps - A detective confronts a deadly foe in the mist to save her wife from Death.

Neel Anil Panicker In Search Of An Oasis - A battered and brutalised orphan child discovers sliver of humanity


Our wonderful judge Nick Wilford has been a real trooper over the years. We've sent him some long short lists in the past because we had so much trouble narrowing down our choices. And who can blame us? We see so many stellar entries that choosing winners can be a difficult task. Still, this month we did our best to make things easier on Nick by sending him a short list of five. This is not a reflection on the quality of the entries this challenge. There were passionate email exchanges involved as we whittled things down. There were pieces we all loved that did not make the list, so do not despair if you don't see your entry listed here.


Thank you once again to all of you who continue to comment! Commenting is a major part of WEP's success. The feedback you give your fellow writers helps them improve their craft, and the words of encouragement help to motivate and inspire.


The winner of each challenge gets the opportunity to receive a critique prize if they have a piece of writing ready, whether it be a full manuscript, a short story or an article. They also get the opportunity to write a guest post for WEP on a topic of their own choice. If a winner has no work for critique, please let us know so we can pass the opportunity on to the next on the list. We need you to contact the editor right away, then send your work in under three months at the most. Editors are busy people who need to plan, so please respect their time.

Our sidebar proudly displays everyone who is offering critique prizes for 2021. You are welcome to contact any of the editors with a request for work. 

This month's critique prize is brought to us by our own Yolanda Renée. She is offering a beta read/critique or a plot critique.  Thank you, Renée!



Congratulations, Elephant's Child, for your entry, Un....

Nick wrote: "The rhythm really hammers home the oppressive feel and air of inevitability, but fortunately, this is leavened by having a hopeful ending. Very thought-provoking".

Sue, please post your badge on your blog and link the badge to your winning entry. Enjoy the critique prize or pass it on if you have no body of work ready. We eagerly await your Guest Post on a topic of your choice!



Congratulations, Damyanti, for your entry, A Smothered Scream.

Nick wrote: "Just devastating. Highlights how we should never be blase about atrocities happening far away (or close to home) and gloss over them as just statistics."

Damyanti, please link the badge to your entry and post it on your blog. Congratulations!



Congratulations, Jamie, for your stunning entry, The Regret Scream.

Nick wrote: "It is interesting that we have something topical here. A very sobering look at how things could have been even worse than they already have been."

Jamie, please link the badge to your entry and post it on your blog.


Nick also commented: "Wow. This is so hard to pick. All five pieces hit hard and are devastating in different ways...phenomenal..."

We agree - so many amazing stories and writers!

Stay safe and keep writing, everyone! If you're entering NaNoWriMo, good luck! We endorse it as it's great for getting that first draft done. Let us know how you go or if you need a writing buddy!

Please join us for the DECEMBER challenge, which is just around the corner. That challenge brings us...NARCISSUS. Hope to see you there! PLEASE NOTE: Entries are accepted from December 1, so get busy! Baffled about what to write? Check the CHALLENGES 2021 page.

This prompt has rich possibilities. 

Please note the dates of the challenge. December is a busy month for many people across the globe. We're spreading out the posting times to help out those of you (and us!) with busy schedules.  


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  1. Way to go winners!
    I didn't get to visit everyone this month. I was preforming after-death spiritual cleansing ceremonies last month and it drained me entirely.
    But oh man, I'm so proud of my cousin. Head noogies next time I see you, girl!

    1. I'm so sorry for your loss, J Lenni. Take care of yourself!
      Jamie's piece was excellent!

  2. Congrats to all winners! We have an amazing pool of talented writers at WEP. Just beyond wonderful!

  3. My comment comes down to THANK YOU and CONGRATULATIONS.
    Thank you for the award, congratulations to all the winners, and indeed to everyone who participated. And thank you to the doughty administration team who make WEP a safe place to be heard and to Nick for taking on a job I would find impossible.

    1. Thanks, Sue, for your outstanding entry which shook us to the core. Congratulations on your win, and thank you for sharing so intimately.

  4. Thanks to Nick and all administrators of the WEP series.

    Congratulations to EC - it was an outstanding take on the prompt. I'll be round the winners in a day or two ... so pleased for Sue - excellent - cheers Hilary

    1. Hilary, your story was popular amongst the team. Loved the idea of the steam train screaming. However, it's always difficult to pick only 3 stories!

  5. Congratulations everyone and especially the winners :)

  6. Congrats to all! Narrowing down to 5 was so difficult! So many great takes on the prompt.

  7. Congrats EVERYONE...and I mean, EVERYONE...including all the authors. I read all, and I know how hard it must have been for Nick and staff to pick the winners. Everyone have a joyous Thanksgiving! See you next month for Narcissus~

  8. Congratulations to the winners and everyone participating! I read each entry and enjoyed them all. Thanks to Nick and all the hardworking WEP team members.

    1. Thank you so much Debbie. Was so excited to see you in the lineup again.

  9. My favorite month, and favorite challenge. It never disappoints! Amazing entries as always. Thank you, everyone for making The Scream more than a Halloween tale but a true tribute to the art!

    1. Oh, and links in the tweets, once again fixed. Sorry to all those who have tweeted. It's the one wrench in the mix every time. :)

  10. A huge congratulations to all three winners. Your submissions were great and I enjoyed all three.
    Shalom aleichem

  11. Congratulations to everyone! One of the best and most intense of challenges! Thank you for great reads. I think Nick nailed it with his comment! You are definitely phenomenal writers.

  12. Congratulations! Such a talented group here--even down to the tagline!

    ♥.•*¨Elizabeth Mueller¨*•.♥


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