What an amazing group of entries for Moonlight Sonata. Dazzling, heartbreaking, poetic, and educational while fully entertaining. Was it the imaginative, artful prompt? The selection of music? Or just the superbly talented writers who participated? All of it, of course! This is why the WEP challenges are such fun, but so very hard to judge.
Thank you, everyone, for your excellent entries:
Here's a round-up of the entries posted :
Taglines: Moonlight Sonata
Shannon Lawrence - Tagline: Sometimes you need to get away for a bit to find some peace.
Jamie - Tagline: An unanticipated kiss fails, revealing a crush.
Lenny Lee - Tagline: Beethoven writes a poem for his lover in the form of a sonata.
Nila Bose - Tagline: Shining on empty.
Olga Godim - Tagline: Moonlight and music combine in mysterious ways.
Debbie D - Tagline: Who was that mysterious pianist?
Bernadette Braganza - Tagline: Judge furniture by its soul, not age.
L G Keltner - Tagline: Even in dark times, music can provide the light you need.
Jemi Fraser - Tagline: The ability to create music, our species' most redeeming quality?
Denise Covey - Tagline: There are more things that nature has wrought than humans can ever imagine.
N. R. Williams - Tag line: When life is stressful, time off is everything.
Pat Garcia - Tagline: The Power of Touch.
J. Q. Rose - Tagline: Romance and danger in a moonlight stroll through a college campus.
Renee - Tagline: Moonlight thrall or real-life goddess?
Damyanti Biswas - Tagline: So unguarded in repose.
Michael Di Gesu - Tagline: Noir, party time, dead body time.
Roland Clarke - Tagline: As relationships are rekindled, an all-women squadron reforms in Ukraine.
Christopher Scott - Tagline: This is the price for inspiration.
Naughty Netherworld - Tagline: The Birth of Luna.
Kalpana Misra - Tagline: Why don't these parents call the police when their child goes missing?
J Lenni Dorner - Tagline: Did your parents fear you would be kidnapped by the government at birth?
Michelle Wallace - Tagline: This was not the re-connection I had hoped for.
Sonia Dogra - Tagline: The Call of the Past.
Mary Aalgaard - Tagline: Mother Nature calms the Night Terrors.
Hilary Melton-Butcher - Tag Line: Allow Family Time ...
Shortlist
So many great entries. We had such trouble whittling down our choices. On our first pass, we chose Mary, Bernadette, Jamie, Michelle, Pat, Michael, Ornery Owl, JLenni, Shannon, Debbie, Hilary, Lenny, Nancy ...
Before
Nick Wilford gets our final list, each of us defends our individual choices.
And this time, we wanted to share those words that flipped between emails as we justified our choices:
"The
twist was spectacular."
"Best twist ever!"
"Her
words were lyrical."
"Brilliant
use of the prompt and packed a great punch."
"Compelling
use of the prompt and a super engaging story. I loved how she stripped the
music back to its essential vibrations and combined so many sweeping themes -
love, war trauma, healing, disability - into this compassionate, lovely
flash."
"A
nuanced flash about the effects of colonization. Maybe I connect with his
stories because of my country's history."
"Great
imagery, and something anyone who has struggled with night terrors or anxiety
can relate to."
"She
took the prompt in an unexpected direction."
"I
enjoyed hers best with the prelude, the pictures, the gripping, evocative
narrative."
"He
is so great with his descriptions and setting the scene. I'm envious."
We
all agreed that this was one super splendid challenge. I can't remember when I
last enjoyed this level of reading pleasure all around. Beat all expectations
this prompt has!
There are more superb entries for every challenge than winners' places. So don't be disheartened if your name isn't there this round. Maybe next time. Keep writing! Who knows? You could be the winner of the next challenge.
Commenting
Thank you to all those who comment widely, especially those who read and comment even when they do not have an entry in the ring or are unwell. Commenting is super important to us both as feedback towards the improvement of writing craft and as a communication channel for community building.
Sadly, this month as in months past we've had commenting issues. No one's quite sure what is going on, but it is not just a WordPress/Blogger issue. Please check the comments on the WEP post where we posted comments that wouldn't take on blogs.
Please note that due
to incessant spamming issues, we have had to keep comment moderation on. So
your comment may not show up right away, but we will get to it soonest
possible. We value your comments, please keep them coming.
Critique Prize
The winner of each Challenge has an opportunity to get a critique prize from professional editors/published writers – our sidebar displays the prizes for 2022. If the winner has no manuscript/WIP ready for critiquing, then the prize is passed on to the runners-up. Therefore, it’s important that the winner(s) let us know immediately if they do not have work ready to be critiqued, so that we may get in touch with the next in line. Also important to submit work for critique within three months of winning so that editors can plan their work schedule. They are busy people and work to definite, often urgent deadlines. So thank you for your cooperation on this matter.
Christine says, "I'm a detailed critic. I give my reactions as I read, along with what I like and don't like, overall plot, tropes, and characterization. I try my best to be as helpful as possible."
The winner also gets a guest post here at WEP on a topic of their own choice.
NOW LET'S CONGRATULATE THE WINNERS!
THE WINNER OF THE AUGUST 2022 CHALLENGE, MOONLIGHT SONATA, IS PAT GARCIA -
Nick said - "Achingly romantic and a testament to the healing power of music. As important to the soul as to the ears."
PAT, please post this badge and link it to your winning entry. Enjoy the critique prize or pass it on if you’d prefer. We look forward to a guest post here on a topic of your choice soon.
Congratulations, MARY! Your first entry for WEP, Drifting Away, captured us with the flawless, lyrical writing and enchanting images. Thank you for this reading pleasure.
Nick said, "Calming, meditative and restoring, like watching the moon rise over the lake. I felt like I was there in that moment."
MARY, Please take this badge and link it to your winning entry on your blog.
AND FINALLY, THE ENCOURAGEMENT AWARD FOR THE AUGUST 2022 CHALLENGE GOES TO BERNADETTE BRAGANZA -
Nick said, “Short but intriguing. I'd like to see this expanded but what's there gives the reader enough to add more details on their own..”
BERNADETTE, please take this badge and link it to your entry on your blog.
Thank you to all our amazing participants for your entries. We read so many magnificent and magnificently
varied takes on this month’s prompt!
Read stunning entries from our WEP AUGUST 2022 MOONLIGHT SONATA winners @DeniseCCovey @yolandarenee @LGKeltner @OlgaGodim @jemifraser #amwriting #flashfiction #wepwinners https://writeeditpublishnow.blogspot.com/2022/08/winners-wep-august-2022-challenge.html
#WEPFF MOONLIGHT SONATA winners announced @DeniseCCovey @yolandarenee @LGKeltner
@OlgaGodim @jemifraser https://writeeditpublishnow.blogspot.com/2022/08/winners-wep-august-2022-challenge.html #amwriting #flashfiction #wepwinners
Come congratulate our AUGUST winners! #WEPFF MOONLIGHT SONATA Challenge @DeniseCCovey @yolandarenee @OlgaGodim @LGKeltner @jemifraser #amwriting #flashfiction #wepwinners https://writeeditpublishnow.blogspot.com/2022/08/winners-wep-august-2022-challenge.html
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